Review

We went out and filmed another 2 shots which we felt were needed in order to make the film opening make more sense and flow more smoothly. These shots were of a bus going pass the school and a shot of shoes walking off of the bus. We feel that including these shots has benefited our film opening a lot as it has added a link to establish that the girls were at school which was no clear in the rough cut. We had a shot of the school which included no movement but this looked odd so we took it out and replaced it with the shot of a bus passing giving it a realistic feeling of school.